The Interactive Poetry Pages
Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Three
Show authors
for all the poetry lines.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Poem Number 263
Naughty Nana
got no gertle
Her fanny waves
like the sea of blue
Don't you crowd her
when she passes
She might get her spray
on you
through and through
The only word to describe her would be pee-ugh.
Commentary:
From one Anon to another, "Thanks for the last 2 lines."
-------
I hope this last comment was sarcastic, stupid changes are often drastic.
-------
To "anonymous" get some balls. Oh, you don't have any! Funny you still smell like balls though. Maybe if you didn't have so many in your mouth in one day you wouldn't smell like them! Up yours, Matt
-------
And if you think that was offensive try being the person who the poem is talking about! Any problems, Matt
Add to commentary
Unless specifically noted otherwise, copyrights for all lines entered belong to the authors only.
Show authors
for all the poetry lines.
Return to current poems in progress.
Completed Poems.
Top Welcome Page for the Interactive Poetry Pages.
Send a general comment to the web author, or view some of the comments left by others.
Thanks in advance for any feedback you can pass on.
Disruption report - Please choose this link to report any disruptive or offensive entries, or closing sprees, if they appear. Thank you.
Brought to you by Ann Cantelow.