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Poem Number 251
Phantasmagoria
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Quintessential
residential
quantum physics
pie.
Dessication
revelation
generator
spy.
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Oklahoma
melanoma
Gallileo
shock.
Stegasaurus
Aunt Delores
inner sanctum
Bach.
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Bluebeard's ghost
Sunday's roast
knickerbocker
Gin.
Salamander
Oleander
Lost ya? Then I
win!


Commentary:
Lame. Makes no sense.
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You're right-it makes no sense. It's based on the sounds of the words rather than their content or meaning and it's kind of a joke (see title). I got the idea both from the interesting sounds of the words and the definition of "phantasmagoria". Thanks for the comment and the chance to clarify-Jennifer (je)
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Lamer
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Your name? You should be kinder to yourself. j
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no. the poem was lame to begin with. the explanation just made it lamer.
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Uh, yeah.
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Hey I thought it was cool! that play on words. you guys think it's lame cuz you can't do that, it takes a lot of brain power and a big dictionary!:) hahaha i love that!
Pat
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it has the most fascinating rhythm...it makes u feel so human too :) Brujah

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Thanks Pat and Brujah. Kind words are worth their weight in gold around here! je
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I am obsessed with this poem, it made me laugh when I read it. It makes no sense, but that is the beauty of this poem, it just spins around and around and yet doesn't necesserely do anything, yet at the same time, I got the feeling, that it was trying to say something. As to what, that I am unsure of.
ALBEE
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Then on a most basic level it does not work.
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