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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Three


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Poem Number 242
If I punch you in the face
---je
because you don't have any taste
---je
Would you just sit and cry...
---Anonymous
and wonder who? or even why?
---CA, md
If I pray you'll go away
---Anonymous
Would you promise me you'd stay
---Anonymous
so far away that I would lose sight of your face
---Anonymous
Don't make me Punch you in the face
---Anonymous
I spit on you, called you a whore
---Anonymous
Next day, I was at your door
---Anonymous
i never meant to hurt
---Anonymous
Would you forgive me if I flirt
---Anonymous
With words too big for you to understand
---Anonymous
Ohh how I miss holding your hand
---Anonymous
I'm a fool for all of this
---Anonymous
Because you fullfil my every wish
---Anonymous
When I hit you I cry and cry
---Anonymous
But you make, you lie and lie
---Anonymous
If you would sit and listen to me
---Anonymous
I would not have to hit thee
---Anonymous


Commentary:
wow thats amazing is that speaking from personal experience or did you just have a weird thought? any way its good i like it peace out angy
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Can't speak for anyone else but the first two lines came from a crappy poem I wrote about a comment made towards me on another salon. I liked the first bit so I thought I'd toss it out and see what everyone else would make of it. The results are far better than the original! jennifer (je)
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