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Poem Number 240
Petal blossom cheek taste honey butter,
Tender touching lip sparks felt me shudder,
Dappled shade of lace upon warm bed sheet,
Heart explodes between your love and I meet,
Patience just feels right,
Moist embrace all night,
Candied kiss deep dark dream smooth romance sweet.
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Made up first seven lines on the spot. Please write another verse or two. - Viper
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Okay, I wrote this last week, and when I read it now it looks very cumbersome and meaningless. I wanted to create some wordplay, but I think I just created a jumble. Ah - well, will try again later. - Viper
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