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Poem Number 365
Stuck in a world where hearts are evil and cruel
Crying inside, trying to block the air
Untangling webs of destruction hold me in despair
I'll blame mother for the glorious mess in my head
The bottles continue stacking in my underwear drawer
Clacking and clinking like the teeth of whore
Storing my dresses in the sink near the fake flowers
I've squandered my days with my nature-born powers!
The dirt behind my ears is growing like an earthen pot
Sometimes sitting in the bathroom smoking rot
I'll put aside an hour or two and fill a pee-jug high
Not worrying about the tippy yellow pee jug fly
I'll scrape the walls for things to add to my dinner
I'll take grandma to the bar and make her a winner
then we can go to the beach where its really hot
and go back into he bar, take another shot
Commentary:
Stop snivelling and suck it up!
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Gad!!
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U R A WINNER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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