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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Two
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Poem Number 348
I feel so empty
Yesterdays glass half full
You said you loved me
Now I am so confused
I just wish you would let me be
Or get over yourself and not be amused.
climb a tree, take a pee
have a little faith, don't abuse
Commentary:
all the last words has to rhyme
Sungwon
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Is that written somewhere? Like a law or somethin'?
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It's kind of implied in the named of the salon; Salon for Rhyming Poetry 1. See?
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