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Poem Number 333
A maiden on her wedding night
sEE
THE
WOMAN
SIT
UP
ALL
NIGHT
LONG, HUMMY I SAY, WITH MY MOUTH FULL OF HAIR
Commentary:
A maiden. on her wedding night,
Said, "I think making love is a fright.
"To quit is sheer folly!"
Cried her husband,"By golly,
"We'll practice 'till we get it right."
...BR
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..while being very careful of course, to fall short of perfection..*s.t.*
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As i gently remove your gown of white, M.VELA #6
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