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Poem Number 325
My Disorderly Zoo
Is full of monkey doo.
I have `to scrape and scoop
Getting rid of monkey poop,
And the thought occures to me:
Who is captive? Who is free?
I think I might feel less funkey,
If I were to beat my monkey.
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Commentary:
My disorderly zoo’s a miraculous place
The lions dressed up in black leather and lace
with paranoid penguins, bipolar bears
and meat eating plants to catch me unawares
Autistic anoas and klepto kiwis
and hives full of people
with rooms full of bees
Maniacal meerkats (I like them the best)
tigers with Tourette’s
my temper to test
Chimp and chime , I squander my time
straining my eyes to see
Perusing all the curious sights
staring back through these bars at me

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The commentary's cute
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ZOO
WHO WATCHES WHO
CAGES DIVIDING NATURE
NATURE DEFINING BOUNDARIES
BOUNDARIES DEFINING NATURE
NATURE DIVIDING CAGES
WHO WATCHES WHO
ZOO
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*s.t.*
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