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Poem Number 318
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Commentary:
A percentage of the whole
Memories scattered
They've forgotten most that mattered
Tattered thoughts
of who they were
Because you always thought you knew
That smile is what they were
Yet just a cover for the sick
And in the end
all they were
simply adds up
to another statistic
~bc
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that poem sucks big time
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that poem sucks big time
llllllloooooollllll
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