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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Two


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Poem Number 317
Kill Me


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You read the poem above too, huh?

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Are you sure that's a poem? if, so do you have a problem with yourself? I think it's a little too dramatic as well as... well...short and simplicit. by the way, have you ever heard of a quatrain? If not, you should try it; it's great!
Senses
Have you ever seen
A victory
Over your renewed
Personality?
Have you ever touched
A baby's face
And felt his soft skin
Beneath your finger's grace?
Have you ever smelt
A bit of happiness
That soothed you through and through
With its aroma that you caress?
Will you ever hear
Of the drama in your life
That has no inner soul
And yet it's for abolishment of this
That you strive?

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