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Poem Number 313
It'll take more than rain , to wash away the memory of you
hard driving like a train, still your vission shines through
elcetrical storm, flashing all around
echos of thunder, can't drown out the sound
I can hear your sweet voice, my heart starts to pound
storm clouds and memories
of you
.
It'll take more than speed to drive away the memory of you
A Vipers what I'd need, still your vission ensues
heavy with the right foot, accelerators down
twelve cylinders cranking, can't drown out the sound
I can hear your sweet voice, my heart starts to pound
fast cars and memories
of you
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It'll take more than 2 s'es in vision to get me over you.)rainman
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