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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - Two


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Poem Number 312
Ya'll quest to be the reallest, I'm the illest to grip the mic ,fool
I battled jesus to the death and ripped all his deciples
to acquire the title of the fittest in survival
then to complete the cycle,i was murdered and resurected in cairo
comin' back forth with rap recitals
and you can't get on top of this
while i'm sittin on top of this acropolis
with a skill level you could'nt see through your occulus
with bifocals or binocculars
that's why i laugh at these nursury rhymes ya'll scribble
cause i maintain heavy rains while you strain to drizzle
wikee wikee
many bootleggers tried to duplicate my context on memorex
but they couldn't 'causee concepts from my cortex
are to complex to be expressed in text
and all they get is squeeks and beeps
'cause there aint an apparatus here in the stratosphere
that can duplicate my speach
as far as my lyrics are concerned, I write them on titanium sheets
'cause when my intelligence peaks
my pen tends to generate certain levels of heat
a hundred thousand degrees, to hot for lava to even reach
i had sole control over planet x ,just like a dominatrix
wearing black avirex or apex
all you fake MC's can't concieve, why kianeau reeves couldn't
weave through the matrix
i got so many massive flows bustin, that you couldn't kill them
with spermacidally lubricated latex, BIATCH!!!!!?!


Commentary:
I'd pat you on the back, but that's your job!
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this busted my nut, yo.
amber
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fuck'n A.
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What, exactly, are the coordinates of Planet X? When may we expect
their fine company?---
Some writers would be more believable if they bought & used a dictionary
and learned grammatical usage. to/too eeeks
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copy on that one. those who say the above don't matter are kidding themselves. go to a book store. what do you see on the shelves, books full of bad spelling and poor grammar?? nada
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Yes, I think a dictionary would be a nice idea..........., a thesaurrus wouldn't hurt either.
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I think it is Great!!! oldpam
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