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Salon for Rhyming Poetry - One


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Poem Number 997
I am here on the headland,
where a thousand hungers cannot reach
prayer-flags snap and shout in the wind.
In the bay below, small boats are passing.
and i have taken a moment to think of you.
passing wind in the shrine room.
but then wind overtook me


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what is this?
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a poem? at least before the childish line about bodily functions.
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Clearly the author meant "Wendt" as in "passing Wendt in the shrine room" as in "GGeorge Wendt" as in "Norm" from 'Cheers' as in clearly that is what the author meant.
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