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Poem Number 972
Under the Ice
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deep and dark and water
cobalt cold and frozen
pressing close and heavy
pushing out all light
breathing out in bubbles
inhaling liquid ice
sounds of blood and pressure
numb upon my lips
inside me frozen winter bleeds
in hypothermic drips
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