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Poem Number 961
I do bicep curls,
But what man has truly uplifted the heart of his special girl?
Super man played the suitor
With Clark the gent and suit.
Hopefully some day I will muster
All the might and will for romantic glories.
Now all Popeye has to do is add brains to his toot.
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Hi all, I've written lines 1-7, with apparently nothing else in mind besides love and love for working out. I guess I was picking up loads of whimsy here, and the weight of indulgence was just too much. If anyone can put a second part on this to give it some 'muscle', I think it would be quite delightful.
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