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Poem Number 958
My world spins into cloudy dust
I weep into slumber as the day goes by
wake in the mourn and scrape my thoughts
breathe the air within the sky,
I'll lay there till i die
Dying from a broken heart
That has torn you and I apart
My tears are all that consoles me now
i feel there's nowhere else to turn, your love for me i still do yearn
for i love you so much i don't know how
To breath without your love
Commentary:
I'm impressed
To breath without your love
Fred Donald Brace
Freddb@netscape.com
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