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Poem Number 957
YOU
SUCK
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See you! you're not the lover I fell in love with
you've changed and I don't recognise what I see
I woke up this morning and rubbed the sleep out
and there's a toatl stranger in my life with me
are you bored with us and want to leave
but just haven't got the balls to say
or is there a pereverted enjoyment that you get
in sitting picking fault all day
you used to love me to distraction
and swear that I was everything you desired
but now its sorry, don't be angry
well love I'm really tired
Did I miss it when the shine rubbed off
was I sleeping when the glitter turned grey
I went to sleep with a woman I adored
and woke up again with a stranger today
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excellent poem. very little else caught my interest. reaL compelling. do
keep it up.
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excellent poem. very little else caught my interest. reaL compelling. do
keep it up.
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