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Poem Number 956
Depression sweeps over me
I’m helpless to it’s power
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I feel as though I’m wilting
Like an out of water flower
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My heart just feels so heavy
Like a thousand tons of lead
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When I think of how we were
Things we did and things we said
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We held each other close
But somehow let it go
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I felt like such a fool
Because I let my feelings show
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I’m so sorry that things went wrong
From the bottom of my heart
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Its strange how things can end
As quickly as they start
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The good friend I lost in you
Is the saddest part of all
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Can we forgive, can we forget?
Can we survive after the fall?
* * * susyqzee * * *
You're the one that made me smile
and made me love you all the while
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This is how its supposed to be
me and you, you and me
Know as I let you go, Can I ever let my feelings show
I wish you knew just how I feel and I wish this shit wasnt real! I hate it when we fight because I always know your right!
Commentary:
poem number 956 sounds like you should call a hot line. However learn through experience. nic nac paddy wac dig a dog a bone time for this one to go home.
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