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Poem Number 1030
On the western side of the valley
the windows shone like gold
so, at the dawn a lad set out
to see what treasure they'd hold
the sun was low, when he reached his goal
the windows he'd seen from afar
and, he found the windows were made of glass
as windows generally are
turning, to start the homward trek
he was surprised to find
that, now, the gold was shining
in the windows he'd left behind
So he turned back and once again moved swiftly to the building
For if 'twere he that kill'd Yngwie
His conscience would not relent
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