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Poem Number 1130
Someone sat upon a roof looking down at us
I asked him what's he doing there, said, "Waiting for the bus."
"Are you an atheist or are you simply jaded?"
How dared he ask what is so ovious!
Without entitlement it sounded vulgar.
We couldn't embark on a losing battle.
Let him believe he's Humpty Dumpty.
No harm intended unless he jumps for freedom.
Commentary:
line 4...obvious oops M
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