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Poem Number 1555
I am the one who could be your love
and always be there when you need or want
i can be future i can be your past
i am your forever love
Commentary:
i think i wrote a pretty good poem
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Except I could be their love, too.
And you wouldn't be there if you were crushed in an accident.
The future and the past don't exist, and nothing lasts forever. Other than that, you wrote a pretty good poem.
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The poem should be as follows...
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Anyone could love you.
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But don't count on it.
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The future and the past don't exist.
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Nothing lasts forever.
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So let's celebrate.
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