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Poem Number 1249
I spied a puffy young hamper cunt
here we go again
you spied yourself looking in the mirror
and just had to come here and tell anyone who would listen
your fondest asperations
to be a hamer cunt
a walking poster illustrating the results
of sleeping around with no protection
so take a good look
thoes sores your sporting aren't so easy to get rid of
you've come and tried to infect every room
with your crude obsessions
you seem to love the word cunt
why not have it tatooed across your chest
then everyone who sees it will know
just what to call you


Commentary:
hey, don't go knockin' people who like the word cunt, i like it too.
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If used in good context it works, but who ever put the same first line in every salon in this general poetry, used it in a really lousy way.
It made me angry enough to fill in the blanks.
When it's used in a passionate romantic way, it is a compliment, but after reading how it was used in each room, it made me plain angry, because it gave me a feeling that it ment in a very rude and cutting way.
So I responded in the way that would let the author of the first line know what I thought.
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