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Poem Number 1247
Dancing on your lily pad
So sorry your not home
Trashing your whole damn swamp
'Cause I hate to dance alone
You didn't think Id come here down this bumpy road
Because You think your froggy,and I am just a toad
Well I have on good authority your the only fake
So watch your back you big smartass,Here comes Mr.Snake!!!!


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Lets call this..... There's always someone bigger!! Does anybody get this at all?
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no, i'm much too stupid to understand this.
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:)
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Hmmmmmmmmmm.....sounds like a poem birthed out of jealousy, but maybe not.
Or maybe it's just a I'm gonna get you poem?
would the author please explain what this poem is about?
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it's about mr. snake coming to get you. WATCH OUT, HE'S IN MY PANTS!
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ohhhh I see...I just thought you were really happy to see me :)
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Yes, maturity (or lack thereof) is spread from page to page here at IPP
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get over yourself and get a sense of humor, mr. maturity. where in real life can you say things like WATCH OUT, HE'S IN MY PANTS? coming here and being stupid is a great way to unwind.
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Mr Maturity hasn't got a snake in his pants, thats the problem.
Peace
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haha good one :)
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Mr. Maturity...sounds like a start for somthing more than a poem, maybe a story?
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good one, it made me laugh. Can't we all just get along. Mr. maturity was only making a comment to the poem. Everyone has the right to comment. So what he din't like it but, we do. Who cares I don't.
JJ
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I love this poem it licks my nut sack , i feel sugar .
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You are like so IMMATURE!!!
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Your writing in caps makes a pulsating in my vulva that is too much to handle
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Get over it, dear.
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Ohhh, but I don't want to, it feels so gooooooooooooooooooooooood
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I assure you that this was not about your male penis envy,or anybody's pulsating vulva!:) But I am seriously entertained by your rolling comments.
This is actually a poem about Frogs and toads. No it isn't it's a cartoonish vision I had. I hadn't slept in 36 hours!! It's about whatever in the hell you think it is I guess. I wrote it about revenge. Glad you some people liked it. Entertained by those who didn't!!! Thanks much!!~B.moon
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