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Poem Number 1235
Darkness here
Nothing else
nothing but me
Or am I nothing?
How long have I been alone?
When will someone bring the light
Comforted by the sound of my own heart breaking
I long to be loved
need to be held
I pray for the touch of another
One who is not empty
Someone who knows this darkness
But is not afraid to leap
I made this place to hide inside
To hide behind
My mask is this
My wall is here
Will noone see into my darkness
Can anyone understand my madness
Will I never know anything real?
Commentary:
Very well done. I rough transition from "not afraid to leap" to "I made this place to hide inside", but otherwise quite a talented poet and interesting.
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Thanks for the commentary. Yeah this one didn't really flow the way I had planned for it. I was hoping noone would notice.CRAP!~B.Moon
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