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Poem Number 1226
Here comes young Mr. Gray
who makes love to his woman all day
but when no other's about
to challenge this lout
he'll straight up and give her away.
Commentary:
oops. "..when no other lad's about.." sounds bettah..
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and threaten. threaten instead of challenge..yeah that's the ticket..
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"Aye, aye aye, sharpen yer boot, and bludgeon yer eye!"
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