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Poem Number 1225
spammy the naive schoolmarm
clandestinely shrinking her heads
met stoolie the puerto-rican strongarm
and now them heads is Feds.
now dicky the fucked up piss ant
drinks caustic soda right from the bottle
his wasteband resembles an ensuant
of breaking then surging full-throttle!
spazmod the rotting mad man
eats spam for breakfast and lunch
whenever he dances the can-can
his intestines get all in a bunch
ivy the dyslexic dragon
spits poison instead of fire
though some say she lived with Cromagnon
his wife would call them a liar
now on the eve of armageddon
these odd little people all met
they were the saddest bunch of misfits
they had to be put down by the vet
Commentary:
Interactive, she said loudly, startling everyone.
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nice beginning; can we make it sing?
el esp.
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philharmonic like
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hee...good ending. nice vocal range it has.
el esp.
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