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Poem Number 1616
how to fix what isn't broken
appreciate the content of the empty space
a hole cannot be, so if the dirt is replaced
it cannot be doubly so

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a hole cannot be so, if the dirt is replaced

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not so I say for it be thus
once a hole tis always such
replaced dirt does not turn back time
even a filled hole is a hole
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Poem Number 1617
we watch the clowns go by
forgetting they are you and i

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neat
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