alas i have waited for eternity
for my love to return to me
first he was a sweet memory
now he means nothing to me
i often thought he was bold
and now his heart seems to be cold
yet still i wait
me i hope he doesn't hate
-BB

I would like to make a suggestion. Take the word "me" off the last line and put it at the end of the previous line, thusly:..
..
yet still I wait, me
I hope he doesn't hate
..
kind of gives it a cajun flavor.
...WR

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thanks for the suggestion i agree it works better
...BB
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