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Poem Number 825
Unwrap the moment
to find a naked pause
disguised as a question
Posed by an angel.
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The first four lines could possibly stand alone. (The initial letters of the second and third lines should perhaps thus be capitalised.) If so, "Interlocutor" might serve as a title for the poem.
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I wrote the 2nd & 3rd lines, like Interlocutor as title, also like the 4th line someone added. - ragman
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i wrote the first line. just felt the need to say that :) - whoever
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