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Poem Number 722
The Hollow
beneath your chin is where the sun sits
Commentary:
The hollow is a place of darkest fear
It is the place you can't go near
Got a mint for your door?
Place it there, monsters no more.
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I've heard of garlic and silver crosses but breath mints also repell vampires and other MONSTERS?
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It's meant for the monsters within silly
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Oh, thanks. I didn't realize the demons within are socially conscious.
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Of course they are, when they surface! Snap snarl grr grr
Excuse me I must need a mint.
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