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Poem Number 911
my shoes are very nice,
they had a very good life.
they were always smelly,
but were rather friendly.
today as i put my shoes away,
i knew that's where they'd probably stay.
i've worn my shoes in the sand and the snow,
they even took me where ever i wanted to go.
the toungue all worn out,
the laces all grey
guess these shoes are just ment for another day.


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this was an assignment we had for an englsh class. we had to write about our shoes. it was very intresting so i thought i'd share it with you! keep on writing! ~Niki V.

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