i once used to brag about things i couldn't do,
i ... like all little kids ... was insecure,
i dont know what i was thinking, but now that i look back i added so much crap to my life
crap that would never have to be there if i just acted like myself.
i try but sometimes it's not enough
why does life have to be this tough
I was like a drone to society, always caring what others said
but thats not me any more.
I changed into some one who acts like they want to act
like who they want to like and dont care who cares
but now i have the most pain in my life, i wonder if i should go back
back to the life of caring, back to adalesence, but i cant
i've learned so much that i cant forget
so much that would change me so much that no one would notice me
but alas my question to you is do you still care

nomore u know i care lol great ending to that poem man...i'm loving u're work!! keeep it up! i think u might have something here..
~~ Niki V.