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Poem Number 905
the lights are fading,my body goes numb,why are u waiting?please dont be so dumb.go get some one to save me,i dont want to lose you now, you looked me in the eyes and said ' i love u '
then the lighs went out and i was lost w/o u
but when your lips touch mine the lights turns on and we'll be happy again
forever


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