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Poem Number 482
Wear fat clothing so no one will see you tremble
Odds are you'll hear about the revolution
when it's all over
You will be channel surfing as the houses burn
and the bodies fall around you
You won't even see it on the news
Disfunctional Family Theater will roll on
with a new host every hour.......
You'll piss during the commercials just like you always do.
and will go on thinking that you matter, like the fool you always were
youll see your true self and believe thats who you arn't.
Then you start to realize mabey that's who you are.
Can you close this door opened so many tmies before my friend
Can you kick down my can of dreams , down down the street
Wear your fat clothing my friend, crittisize me some other time.
I prefer nudity, the baring of my honest soul.
Look at my eyes; they glow with the power to see through you. . .
Commentary:
i like this. have you met my exhusband? ~g~
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Makes no difFRANCE-I SCENTS-KNOW MATTER...
WATT HUE SAY, OAR,,,
DEW
(inN technicolour?)
I SUP POSE-
JEST
GET WITH IT...
GO WON MOOR DAY - GET THROUGH
Again/a'kin you shell~
find write won
that-of-this
(Oh, watt the hell)
Lukes good to you~Ah-h-hmen!
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This poem is so true, and the last verse does give extraflavour - fits really, really cool!
-raw
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