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Poem Number 1177
The Rose of Winter
its frozen center
thaws to the touch
of you young heart
Scents of your sweetness waft
Dancing through the air filling all emptiness
Your sweetness heals, and your sweetness save
save me from my frozen fate
awake me from this lifeless state
Commentary:
pretty
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but not complete, please continue ---RJ
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Lovely :)
-t
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i like a lot! uplifting.
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Nice
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