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Poem Number 1127
Hunting for an Oldsmobile
Look'n for a real good deal
If it's not for sale
It'll be a steal
See the one there, that was Grandma's car
Paint pealing, wouldn't drive her to far
What to buy her? Want is she worth?
is she too old to give birth
I'm an old grandma hehehe
I used to drive a Model T
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Hee, hee, hee. (laughing delightedly) I likes it. Locksmithing by Craftsmen, have screwdriver, will travel. je
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change it up the verse to reflect the car my kids drive....was grandma's olds...
it does have low mileage, kids want to sell it, but sorry it is not for sale. change "Want" should be "What"..where the edit button??? murphdog
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what is the title then?
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