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Poem Number 1124
Valentine
I'd love to share
Jam sandwiches
with you forever


Commentary:
without sustenance
a word

[l o v e ]

so simple and
---pure
can---
=====warp=
tw
is
ting in
your head until its meaning is hopeless
………………………………………………….lost
and all you are left with is

a

[ g h o s t ]

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very nice..........rvenghost
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thanks.
this one was a little off my usual style.
thought I'd post it anonymously.
glad you liked it.

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