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Poem Number 1105
Blink
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Forget an d
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Ouch!
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Commentary:
Stop a moment, World,
at my lonely window.
Pause and let me look upon
your complicated beauty.
Shining silver clouds race by,
speeding seasons change-
life seems like a small town
viewed from my speeding car:
blink and I have missed it,
a blurry landscape in the night.
je 9/15/03
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this is Real Poetry...nice work, je
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The Defense rests!
Score: *****
Judge Wryter (Good to see you again, MY Dear)
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Merci. je
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