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Poem Number 7531
When It Was Spoken(title)
spinning fast, I can't tell


Commentary:
sense my heart breaking
actually feel it aching
don't know what to do
no idea of what to say
mind is full of thoughts
heart... emptied
feel I have nothing left
sense I've lost everything
all I wished for
each and every hope and dream
gone, withdrawn
disappeared, not here
taken away...
ripped apart my heart
when only one sentence
was spoken
Would appreciate comments on this, thanks...
**Amy**
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very nice Amy. It hits home, and is very familiar. I've been there too.
wendy
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thanks... i knew there were others out there... i understand I am not the only one...lol... thanks again, **Amy**

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Could be you lucked out in a big way..If you are talking about what you hoped was love, then indeed you did. Broken hearts, while no doubt major bummers ultimately become seeds to inner peace and truth...jd
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well i am not quite sure what you mean by these words. sounds to me like it was lost before it was ever found.
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