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Poem Number 74
spread me open, sticking to my pointy ribs
open your eyes, as you see what's inside of me,
don't look away in disbelief, look at me, look at what has happened,
I cleaned out your refrigerator
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Catchy opening....
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beautiful so far.
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This has impact! I hope the original writer attempts to finish it.
JK
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Thanks to whomever added the refrigerator line ------now I understand
the term " the dumbing down of America".
jk
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Marilyn Manson should appreciate your fondness for his work. "Man That You Fear" ANTICHRIST SUPERSTAR 1996
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i wanted someone else to finish it
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COPY CAT
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oooohhh...one verse---excuse me---
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oooohhh...one verse---excuse me---
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