
Current poems in progress...
Hovis is no good
---Anonymous
had a dream package in mind
---Anonymous
Nimble balloon girl
---Anonymous
funny stuff !!!!!! c-belleAdd to commentary
"So what?" he spluttered,
---Anonymous
rounding upon the heckler,
---Anonymous
"Don't like Mars? Don't come!"
---eritain
Hah! love it "e" i didnt invite em.........classic38Add to commentary
Nature holds her breath
---BR
Autumn anticipation
---BR
Waiting for the snow
---BR
Nature will exhale any moment now here in Idaho. The season just turned last week. It was sudden and unmistakable. I love 'Autumn anticipation' and how you capped it with the waiting for snow. Excellent work, BR.Add to commentary
LJ from ID
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I'll tell you again that I'm glad to see you commenting again L.J. This year (2011) we got a huge snowstorm befor Halloween.
...BR
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It is a pleasure to come and see such quality poetry, BR. As you said elsewhere, this was a busy site once. Eritain and OptoMike, Da Red Queen, many others with wonderful talent. Would have loved a book of their Haiku's. Then went through a time of vulgarity but that didn't last too long. Such writings melt in the sunshine of true talent. It is so nice to be back among the Poets! I love your work, BR. Lida Jo from Idaho
With you by my side
---BR
The night has lost its terror
---BR
Blessed reunion
---BR
Pleasantries exchanged
---Anonymous
You scratch my back, I'll scratch yours
---BR
In the human zoo
---Anonymous
Good last line. Are we looking in or out?Add to commentary
...BR
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Good last line. Are we looking in or out?
...BR
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LOL!!
LJ from ID
Dancing veterans
---Anonymous
Government's empty promise
---BR
Leaves them in the cold
---BR
So why are they dancing?Add to commentary
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Trying to keep warm.
For light refreshments
---Anonymous
Give me the taste of moonbeams
---BR
The fragrance of stars
---BR
yes it's better to stick with moonbeams and stars...that moonshine can kill you.Add to commentary
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BR, your imagery is sooooo fine! May I use this in my poetry class to illustrate images? I'll give you credit. This is an enviable poem, one of those, "OH, WHY can't I write like that????" poems. LJ from ID
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Lida Jo, you are welcome to use anything I write. I wish I could write well all the time. I wonder if Robert Frost (my favorite) ever had a dry spell?
...Bill (BR)
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BR, thank you so much! Yes, Mr. Frost had dry periods and occasionally I run across a poem of his that I consider not up there with his great stuff.
I do love your work! Lida Jo
In another world
---Anonymous
My imagination soars
---BR
Closer to heaven
---Anonymous
In close harmony
---Anonymous
Diverse voices join as one
---BR
Civilization
---Anonymous
Nobly withstanding
---Anonymous
the dessications of days
---vin
Pride overcomes nedds
---Anonymous
*needsAdd to commentary
Your corrigenda
---Anonymous
Diversity
---BR
lets a hundred flowers bloom
---vin
the start of friendships
---classic38-51, in Missouri now
Heaven's light shiningAdd to commentary
Gently on different roads
Leading us to God
...Bill
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This is giving me goosebumps. I have a son we call BR whose buisiness name is Bill and he could have written this Haiku. I love the title you worked from Bill and I love the power of the word 'gently' as you used it here. Wonderful. LJ from ID
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I appreciate your comments. My name is William Roberts and I live in New Hampshire. I used to think that there was only one narrow road leading to God. As this poem shows, my concepts have changed.
...Bill
Forgot to mention
---Anonymous
the sins of the doubly wise
---vin
take more forgiveness
---BR
Too true. vinAdd to commentary
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Great collaboration, Poets! Well done, and truth! LJ from ID
Moonrise at sunset
---vin
Love's light coming and going
---BR
We are not alone
---BR
I am so confused
---Anonymous
twins light years away
---mice elf
reunited at void's edge
---vin
burn on my brothers
---Anonymous
Some hot buttered toast
---BR
Bacon frying in the pan
---BR
Life's simple pleasures
---BR
Winter
---BR
Souls launch from the shoe
---Anonymous
Winter reignsAdd to commentary
beneath it's mantel
new life stirs
....BR
A million diamonds
---BR
Shining from each laden bough
---BR
Nature's treasure trove
---BR
winter's present
---mice elf
illuminated ribbons
---mice elf
streaming gift wrap sky
---mice elf
You left your earrings
---Vin
And your false teeth on the stand
---BR
Please gum back to me
---BR
Arch fiend, lover!
---Anonymous
flapping tarpaulin
---mice elf
dangerously leaning tent pole
---BR
newly wed campers
---BR
favorite fetish
---mice elf
i tiptoe on his two lips
---Anonymous
erotic instep
---BR
lonely summer night
---BR
I hear the owl call my name
---BR
tears for my leaving
---BR
Only one half lives well
---classic38
Whilst the other is away
---classic38
Together as one
---classic38