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Poem Number 3433
Marbled antelopes
---Anonymous
are streaming across the veldt
---Anonymous
Nature's masterpiece
---BR, New Hampshire

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Poem Number 3435
A swarm of starlings
---Anonymous
Discussing democracy
---BR, New Hampshire
Feathered town meeting
---BR, New Hampshire

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Commentary:
signal's very weak:
ill-informed identibirds
roost on antenna
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--eritain
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Poem Number 3436
Red Kite rides the wind
---Anonymous
My spirit soars on its wings
---BR
So sweet, the freedom
---BR

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Poem Number 3437
Interesting times
---Anonymous
Spears turned into pruning hooks
---BR
Peace prevails at last
---BR

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Commentary:
Written when I still hoped Obama would make the right choice!
...BR
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Poem Number 3439
Pirates of Penzance
---Anonymous
Steaming the intercity
---Anonymous
Kernow kriminals
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 3440
The fifth element
---Anonymous
Earth, Air, Fire, Water and
---Anonymous
The perfect being
---LeeLoo

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Poem Number 3441
hail loverboy
---Anonymous
I think I'll call you "stormy"
---carabelle
Magnificent Thorr
---carabelle

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Stormy Thorr, he brings great thunder and other gifts.
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Poem Number 3442
Norman Tebbit said
---Anonymous
get on yer bike, layabouts
---Anonymous
meet me at the pitch
---eritain

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Commentary:
Too right! vin
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Poem Number 3444
Hovis is no good
---Anonymous
had a dream package in mind
---Anonymous
Nimble balloon girl
---Anonymous

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Commentary:
funny stuff !!!!!! c-belle
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Poem Number 3445
The Magna Carta
---Anonymous
Writ of Habeas corpus
---Anonymous
how i spell divorce
---c-belle

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Poem Number 3446
the wherewithal to
---Anonymous
add a line to this haiku
---Anonymous
was not forthcoming
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 3447
"So what?" he spluttered,
---Anonymous
rounding upon the heckler,
---Anonymous
"Don't like Mars? Don't come!"
---eritain

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Poem Number 3448
10000 rabbits
---Anonymous
my you're busy cottontails
---carabell
orgies hare and there
---BR

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Commentary:
line three is so cute. carabelle
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I kind of got a smile out of writing it! Glad you liked it.
...BR
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On second thought, Carabelle, if you hadn't added a good second line, I couldn't have added the third line. It's fun working off each other's lines.
...BR
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Hmmm. Deja vu mon ami.
Your line is witty. carabelle
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Poem Number 3449
elephantine mice
---Anonymous
wouldn't touch with ten foot pole
---carabelle
Look, Ma, the big cheese
---Anonymous

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Poem Number 3450
carrickmacross lace
---blarney
dresden china on table
---Anonymous
victorian tea
---carabelle

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Just so.
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Poem Number 3451
Only paper moon
---carabelle
sucker born every minute
---cara
Phineas Barnum
---carabelle

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Commentary:
not all make-believe
to those who can see beyond
what's in the wallet
.
--eritain
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such wisdom! admire your style. c-belle
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Thank you for planting the seed. -e
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Poem Number 3452
James Butler Hickok
---c-belle
Deadwood's romany warning
---c-belle
robbed you of caution
---eritain

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Commentary:
well you know it's in the cards that is
if you know how to read them.
why did wild bill sit with his back to the door?
like your third line.
c-belle
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Like your second. I guess there are two reactions to a premonition like that: "Oh, no! I'd better be careful," and "Screw it then." --eritain
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I like the way your mind works eritain.
tell me do you like US History?
c-belle
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Enough that I knew who Hickok was. Not so much that I'd have known what Deadwood was if I hadn't looked it up. Wherever I am, I like to know the local history, the history of everyday things. --eritain
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Poem Number 3453
you are here and warm
---c-belle
making waves across my time
---c-belle
can't stop lovin you
---c-belle

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Commentary:
line 1. bob welch "sentimental lady" fleetwood mac
line 2. e.l.o. "strange magic"
line 3. john mayer "half of my heart"

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Poem Number 3454
Just like the wild west
---carabelle
I could use a sin killer
---c-belle
Steel in his holster
---vin

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Commentary:
"Because the point of a gun was the only law that Liberty understood" (Bacharach and David, "The Man who Shot Liberty Valance," 1962).
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Oh i like that song. sometimes I am in need of a fast Law Man
but I really didn't have an eastern man of the law in mind.
I was thinking a little more buck skin.
c-belle
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Poem Number 3455
Flowerless plant life
---Anonymous
titanium cloud cover
---Anonymous
peeking through asphalt
---DRQ

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Commentary:
vegetative state
could be caused by pollution
rebel without seed. Just being silly.
You're truly gifted. Enjoyed. c-belle

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I like how this ended under that sky. They are remarkable. vin
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Poem Number 3456
Thunder fills the chest
---vin
booming through the blooming woods
---anon
downpour fills dry creek
---anon

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Poem Number 3457
Now I understand
---c
drifting down Sorrow's River
---carabelle
greasepaint will dissolve
---carabelle

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Poem Number 3458
I told you good bye
---c-belle
now please get out of my head
---c-belle
Shrink! I dare you to
---c-belle

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