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Poem Number 3421
ice storm
pulled down the wires
damn it
Commentary:
the forest
prostrated before
the ice storm
everything
encased in crystal
sunlit gems
bits of sleet
pelting me from the
canopy
i eavesdrop
on the trees and sky
conversing
day old tracks
from a milling throng
of rabbits
yin and yang
cool breeze, warming sun
in balance
(Sasha)
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cold electric out
Nature's unexpected gift
fireplace comfort
...BR
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unexpected warmth
from smallest of places
glowing new again
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storm's allegro
followed by a gentle
adagio ----(Sasha)
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I like your contrasts, Sasha. Yin and yang, allegro and adagio. ...BR
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