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Poem Number 3075
green cold waters flow
from icy mountains towards
warmth that ever calls
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...GT
Commentary:
mountain river ice
flowing toward warmth below
her frigid heart melts...:)V
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Nice hiaku GT.We could all use that kind of warming.Our jaded,somewhat cold,hearts could use the cooling that only nature can give.Thanks for the inspirational ku....:)V
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Nice one, Vic. Thanks. --GT
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