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Poem Number 3057
the coldness of steel
against your wrist will not solve
the problems in life


Commentary:
sweet, cold steel
slice deeply into
my buried pain

sweet, warm blood
spill out of me, tears
from my heart.................woundedheart
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brass shell casing
cold in my fingers, hot
in the chamber......................RAS
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your life ends alone
reincarnationists say
you do life again
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GrandmaThing--I have read that the reincarnationists believe that if one
takes their own life they must incarnate again immediately into the same
type of situation until we get it right.--How futile!--May you know love!
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