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Poem Number 1710
If only you knew
how fat you look in that dress
Lard ass in red heels
Commentary:
change of view needed
try some rose coloured glasses
soft vision appears
or
much needed glamour
felt sexy donning red heels
could care less...it worked!
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the original is great(still chuckling), i just had to add my two cents : )....Tessy
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fat to some
soft warm comfort to
another..................RAS
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fat to some
{{{Fluffy}}}
to another
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Inhaling deeply
Zipper stuck halfway up, damn
Time to go shopping............Shapeshifter, been there, done that.
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worn for my pleasure
your sweet intentions make you
a goddess in red.........zendo
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this is why i come here. :) :) :) ~~Quiche~~
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The back of her neck looked like a pack of hot dogs
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Passing gas at school
wondereful child laughter
I must check my shorts
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p.h.a.t.
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Don't know quite how this one fits in to the conversation but it did make me laugh....m4r
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A turtle bit me
I whacked it with a lead pipe
That turtles dead man!!!!
...Space cadet
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barbie doll image
emaciated figure
bulimic children.......LM
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Warm half dried pants
Laying on my bed to
Zip with vice grips....m4r
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clothes shopping
extra large, please, to
hide my shame..............RAS
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