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Poem Number 1691
lovers gone--storeroom
destitute of provisions
commitment but dust
Commentary:
{{{papercup love}}}
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judiblu::Know the feelings--been there-done that! Also like Anon's
"papercup love"--Is that love that lasts as long as the decorations?--
GrandmaThing--May you know love.
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Sorry but everytime I read this , I think of this
lovers in storeroom
amid the fully stocked shelves
provisional love? ....m4r
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