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Poem Number 1665
The wells of silence
your eyes, who once sang to me
now offering peace
Commentary:
enfold me softly
with vioceless joy, be a well
of passion and peace
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hmmm,let's try again...
peaceful heart
enfold me with
voiceless joy
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better? ····· robbynl
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