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Poem Number 1636
she cried in my dream
couldnt reach to wipe her tears
so i cried with her


Commentary:
this is totally lovely, 39....~Quiche~~
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i hope you're with some
one who makes you feel safe when
you're sleeping tonight
(it's a line from 'No Distance Left to Run' by Blur, but it fitted)
'*~Neon
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*~Neon, This "snippit" of lyrics...strikes a nerve in me. I'm trying to find the rest of the lyrics for this song, but can't...do you know where I could find them?....thanks....cecily

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"it's over
you don't need to tell me
i hope you're with someone who makes you feel safe
when you're sleeping tonight
i won't kill myself, trying to stay in your life
i got no distance left to run
when you see me
please turn your back and walk away
i don't want to see you
cos i know the dreams that you keep, it's wearing me
when your coming down, think of me here
i got no distance left to run
it's over,
i knew it would end this way
i hope you're with someone who makes you feel
that this life is the night
someone who settles down, stays around
spends more time with you
i got no distance left to run"
There, that's the whole song. It's gorgeous, isn't it? '*~Neon

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Oh, Wow, yes it is gorgeous. I do especially like that one line; the feeling of just aching to feel safe, secure, etc...that can be a powerful thing, you know? Knowing that someone is watching over you, a protector/defender? Some may call that weak. I call it an honest emotion. Not everyone may agree, but boy, I yearn for exactly that "someone who makes you feel safe when you're sleeping". Thank you for sharing the lyrics.....cecily (wordy, as usual)
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A while back I was talking to a friend about this song, and when I told him the 'safe when you're sleeping' line, he said "You're the one who makes me feel safe when I'm sleeping". It was the nicest thing anyone's ever said to me, ever.
'*~Neon
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Yes thank you very much....m4r
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this is very touching
~mini~
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