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Poem Number 163
Café alfresco.
Light nosh 'neath trees and teal sky.
Big bug in my soup.
And a dove shit in my Eye (metaphorically speaking, of course)


Commentary:
Hey, lighten up!
You think it's easy
crafting these gems
day after day?
I don't think so.
Actually let a little nature
sneak into this one.
An accident.
Sorry.
--bakai
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